Designed to crash, destined to fly,
with broken wings I try to fly,
high into the azure skies,
transcending multitude of motley wonders,
Mesmerised by the mellifluous breeze,
intangible emotions posses me,
I realize the purpose of my flight,
a glimpse of your cherubic smile,
As I look, into the vast emptiness,
I wonder if you are still eluding me,
I fear the inevitable,
I fly higher and higher,
Hope couldnt decieve me a little longer,
desire wouldnt defy inhibitions any more,
the pain urges me to fall,
with broken wings I hit the ground,
Tears trickle down my cheek,
a pearly raindrop enraptures me,
foolishly I assume its you,
with broken wings I fly again..............
15 comments:
Poem is simply superb.The rhytm of the poem let me unmovable...and the essence of it made me fall in love with the bird that is trying to fly higher with the deepest pain it is experiencing...
I LOVE IT.....AND SURE EVERY HUMAN LIKES IT....
nice poem.....good flow.....right words....good finish......keep coming..
its nice man
awesome
really adore ppl who do poems.....admire the way they play wit words and get such a flow........u become one of them now......keep writing.....
beautiful poetry.. keep writing..!
Lovely flow...nice poem...rock on
Just, if the foolishly in the last verse is replaced by a positive word, I might have lost my heart there itself my friend. Thank god!
What i mean is, thinking so positive to succeed again is not at all foolish. right?
hey damn good......... gosh how da hell go u use such big-big words man??????????
@amruth
thanks for bein the first to comment ra..........
@nikhil, prashanth,stephan,setu,tentacles
thanks a lot......i never thought my poems were ne gud...
@dms
arent all optimists foolish....u know how optimistic oops foolish iam...lol....u need to be a little foolish to chase somethin over and over again, even wen u know it is gonna hurt more everytime u try harder....
btw my next post is on ur topic... :)
@nerdscore
gre prep makes u forget all the simpler words.... :D
man that poems damn good !!!!!
shall i call it a verbose poem ???
P.S: I am jus another nitian (non-warangal)
thanks dude...u can call it a bombastic poem.......like one gr8 poet one said, if u cant find the words tht define ur feelings, use words u cant define....wait tht was jus me........... :D
btw which nit?
simply beautiful..
dude....u have been tagged......check my post for details@
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Reminds me of Jonathan Livingston... and I can very well identify with this one (wrote somethign similar lately)
Nice blogspace but i think u should change the template..
Happy Living
Purva
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